Good poem! One minor suggestion: បុ លិ សុ ចិ should be សុ ចិ បុ លិ (ស្តាប់ គិត សួរ កត់) This would be more logical based on deductive reasoning.Just a humble suggestionKhemara
Thank you, Khemara. Reason is that I made that switch in order for it to rhyme with the preceeding word (មិច្ឆាទិដ្ឋិ)Thank you much!
Good poem! One minor suggestion: បុ លិ សុ ចិ should be សុ ចិ បុ លិ (ស្តាប់ គិត សួរ កត់) This would be more logical based on deductive reasoning.
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Khemara
Thank you, Khemara.
ReplyDeleteReason is that I made that switch in order for it to rhyme with the preceeding word (មិច្ឆាទិដ្ឋិ)
Thank you much!